My hook

Siper Island's Trip

Recount by Jak

WALT: Write an amazing hook that will capture my audience.

TEll Me Tell Me Today I had a surprise waiting for me I just couldn’t wait! We were at Nana and Grandad's Whangamata batch that was like a $890,000 dollar house and we were unpacking our stuff. I mean lots of stuff. My little sister didn’t have much but dad had the whole boot packed with stuff half was just Mcdonalds and kfc rubbish.

But we entered the house I was waiting for Nana to come but knowing Grandad and Nana they were in the colossal spa with a TV!! I was begging Dad Nana and Grandad who what how When? there were so many question to get a hint on the trip

we are going on. Auntie tosca came and said “Are you ready to go to” “SHHHH” Everyone schreached. The next day they told me, my ears were melting in dread what we're going to a island that’s about 2 hours away What if I get sea sick. Because I was going on skyla my grandads charter boat.

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